Hear & Identify (Philip Theory)

The differences between the two songs are:

In the beginning of the 'Worse version' at three second into it, there is a cough and if that song was recorded in a better version that 'cough' wouldn't be there. Firstly because the slight cough comes up in the intro and the intro is where you should hear the instruments only.  If there's different noises interrupting, people will easily notice it and secondly because that's not professional and you wouldn't sell stuff like that.

The 'Goodish version' you can understand what he is saying and understand what the lyrics is about because in the 'Worse verse' the words are not clear and poorly recording. Because one of the differences between the 'Goodish version' and the 'Worse verson' is that the 'Worse version' sounds like a vinyl quality and makes you think the song is a old version.

At 00:22 in the 'Worse verson' the person who singing stops for a second a takes a breath and there you can see the weakness of the vocalist breathing control, he comes in very late to get in time with the music. He needs to know where to come in in the song, try to control his breathing and re-record the song again,  so he can see where he is going wrong, and next time make sure that everything is in time and get it perfect.

At 00:53 in the 'Worse version' the clarity of the vocalist isn't up to standard with the rest of the singing. The quality of the singing should be change normally because  if you keep changing the quality then it will ruin the whole effect of the song. Before giving or presenting the song to a listener you must be able to double check and go through the song so that you can be able to hear and check for  the mistakes you've made, so that the song will sound to the standard it's suppose to be at.

At 00:19 in the 'Worse version' when the singer says 'competently' in the song, he doesn't pronounce it properly so you can see that he is exaggerating a bit. when he says 'competently' the sound of the 'p' is like he is pushing his lips too much.

After 00:29  int the 'Worse version' the instruments start being a bit louder and you can hear more the instruments than the vocalist sing. They all should be at the same volume, but because of that you can't perfectly hear what the vocalist is singing because of the instruments being louder.

At 1:03 in the 'Worse version' the backing vocals are very loud and they are over-powering the singer.